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Face Lift San Diego
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Question: Gran is such a neat freak. Whenever I take a drink upstairs, she says, "That is going to make a mess, Eva." If I don't keep my room perfectly clean, she says, "This is a total pigsty, Eva." It gets a little annoying, not that I'm complaining. Gran has been really good to me. She doesn't do the pinch the cheeks, bear hug thing. She is a fairly cool grandmother now that I think about it. It is just a little awkward without my mom or dad around.
Gran sometimes visits dad, but I haven't been able to bring myself to go. It is too hard to see his scarred face, knowing he can't see mine. I visited a few times after the accident, but as more time passes, there is less and less hope for his recovery. It hurts too much to see so weak and fragile. I would rather remember as that big, strong man who would lift me up off the air for a hug and gave me piggy back rides when I felt tired. He was my real life superhero. That is how I want to remember him.
So can anyone in the group help me in San Diego please?
Answer: I think that you can try this way
good story continue right a page or 2 every day and publish it into a real book and i'll buy it you can become an author
Drop the Gran thing. No one calls the grandmother that.
It's just a little too sticky sweet and too contrived. Where's the mother? But what do I know? I never had the stick to it stuff to actually get as far as you have
That is awesome...u should consider being an author if u already aren't!
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